I love how this looks! Absolutely brilliant! spot on comments, great formatting of the markdowns and SUCH AWESOME visualisations! (I am yet to learn them! So excited about them now! )
This one looks way better for sure with all the extra skills you now have up your sleeve!
If i may make one more suggestion: If you would provide some more information on the background of the project, things like: What is the dataset, where did you get it from, what the aim of your analysis itself is and then what you found out. I think it will do wonders for someone who will be reading it. Because as a reader who has no idea of the dataset itself, it made it difficult for me to follow. (In product development terms, think about the end-user )
Fantastic job, however! Also, the last point hit hard! Sexism is indeed a bane!
Congratulations on this one and I am looking forward to seeing more of these projects!